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Fanart: Nami + critique

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First attempt.
I liked it enough to upload it here :)

I really think Nami is a goddess... Will need to work a bit more in this character, don't you think?

The clima tact and the pose were modeled by me.
The girl is A4 with loooooots of tweakings.

Nami and One Piece are copyright Eiichirō Oda

UPDATED 03/31/39: Opening this deviation for the new critique system, just to check :D
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Your first attempt at a 3D image is definitely not bad. The texture for the flag's frayed edge could use some fine tuning (i.e. making the threads smaller) but it works very well here; Can't really say the same for the holes in the flag: while they do add to the worn feel of the flag, it's not practical as those holes would rapidly grow. The Clima-Tact is not bad for a first time render, but the balls don't have the seams, and only one end of the staff has a ball, the other end has the stick part. Nami herself, or rather the tweaks, doesn't look bad at all, and it really does look like how she would be portrayed as a 3D render. If her eyes had been replaced with Beli symbols, the image would be perfect. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt=";)" title=";) (Wink)"/>